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Most writing can be cut by 20–30% without losing any meaning. The main culprits: redundant pairs (past history, future plans), empty qualifiers (very, quite, really), filler phrases (in order to, due to the fact that), and throat-clearing openers (It is important to note that). Cut these patterns first — everything else is secondary.
Wordy writing is not more thorough. It's just harder to read. Every unnecessary word is a small tax on the reader's attention — and attention is what you're competing for.
Concise writing isn't about word count targets. It's about cutting everything that doesn't add information, clarity, or necessary tone. What remains is sharper, more credible, and easier to act on.
The Four Patterns That Inflate Word Count
Pattern 1: Redundant Pairs
These are phrases where two words say the same thing. Both words appear to add emphasis, but they actually cancel each other's effect and add noise.
| Wordy Version | Concise Version |
|---|---|
| past history | history |
| future plans | plans |
| end result | result |
| final outcome | outcome |
| unexpected surprise | surprise |
| advance planning | planning |
| each and every | each / every |
| true facts | facts |
Pattern 2: Empty Qualifiers
Qualifiers like "very," "really," "quite," "fairly," "somewhat," and "rather" are almost always deletable. They signal weak writing and rarely add meaning. If something is important, say it's important — not "very important."
| Wordy Version | Concise Version |
|---|---|
| very important | important / critical |
| quite good | good / strong |
| really significant | significant / major |
| somewhat concerned | concerned |
| fairly obvious | obvious / clear |
Pattern 3: Filler Phrases
Filler phrases are multi-word expressions that can be replaced by one or two words — or cut entirely.
| Filler Phrase | Concise Alternative |
|---|---|
| in order to | to |
| due to the fact that | because |
| at this point in time | now |
| in the event that | if |
| with the exception of | except |
| on a regular basis | regularly |
| in close proximity to | near |
| prior to the start of | before |
| subsequent to | after |
Pattern 4: Throat-Clearing Openers
These are sentence-opening phrases that announce what you're about to say rather than just saying it. They add zero information and make readers wait for the actual point.
| Throat-Clearing Opener | Fix |
|---|---|
| It is important to note that... | Delete it — just say the important thing |
| As I mentioned earlier... | Delete it — readers remember or you're repeating |
| It should be noted that... | Delete it |
| The fact of the matter is... | Delete it |
| What I am trying to say is... | Delete it — just say what you're trying to say |
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It is important to note that, due to the fact that the project timeline has been extended, we will need to, at this point in time, reassess and reevaluate our approach to the planning process in order to ensure that we are taking into account all of the relevant factors and variables that may have an impact on the final outcome and end result of the project as a whole going forward.
Because the project timeline has been extended, we need to reassess our planning approach to account for any factors that could affect the outcome.
Nominalizations: Verbs Hidden Inside Nouns
Nominalization converts strong verbs into weak noun phrases, adding words and removing energy from writing. This pattern is extremely common in corporate and academic writing.
| Nominalization (Weak) | Verb Form (Strong) |
|---|---|
| make a decision | decide |
| provide a recommendation | recommend |
| conduct an investigation | investigate |
| reach an agreement | agree |
| give consideration to | consider |
| make an attempt | try / attempt |
Using AI for Concision Edits
AI rewriting tools handle concision well when given specific instructions. Vague prompts produce mediocre results; specific prompts produce targeted cuts.
Effective prompts for concision:
- "Rewrite this at half the length without losing any information."
- "Remove all filler phrases and redundancies. Keep every idea, reduce words by 25%."
- "Rewrite using active voice and direct language. Cut any phrase that doesn't add new information."
- "Replace all nominalizations with verbs. Remove qualifiers like 'very' and 'quite.'"
After an AI concision pass, review for two risks: meaning loss (did any necessary context get cut?) and tone loss (did the edits strip any warmth or nuance that was intentional?).
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